Think of Harry Potter (since it is so ubiquitous for internets) despite all the magic and shit around Harry he can’t bring people back from the dead (not in any natural state), or make the girl he likes fall in love with him without issues. Think about a great movie or story you watched or read the main character still has to overcome things. He expands girls, fucks them and they are all like “ok this seems legit.” Even when he does not use his mind powers on them, just a little consistency there would be nice. The story is a D+ C-, think about it there is no problem, no crisis, nothing that is a limitation, Carl is essentially Marry Sue of Expansion. Now mind you it is just an opinion, so those jimmies need not be rustled.Īs far as expansion goes it is A+ great stuff great angles and just win all around. I think I have figured out the problem with this comic. Thank you to those of you who contribute I really do appreciate it.
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